That first sentence hooked me, also never thought about shadow work in this application before. It's very cool, although... why not make the main character cunning? Love an anti-heroine that makes smart decisions, even if the decisions end up being naive because they're made without complete information.
That first sentence hooked me, also never thought about shadow work in this application before. It's very cool, although... why not make the main character cunning? Love an anti-heroine that makes smart decisions, even if the decisions end up being naive because they're made without complete information.
thank you! love hearing your ideas about character, as always :)